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The syringe pulses in her hand

I can't do this
I can't do this
Why are they doing this to me?!


She firmly grasps my arm
to keep me from flinching

The needle...
someone stop the needle!
It can't pierce my skin!


She smiles smugly at me
and jabs me with the syringe

That's when everything  s l o w e d  d o w n
I was trapped in this infernal roller coaster
the needle ripping my flesh, the only sound
I couldn't do nothing but look at her

My silent screams you could see through my eyes
delicious chaos mirrored in hers

She had a distinct gaze
her yellow iris warning me of danger
whispering the words she would not say

The havoc my arm felt
was the bits of flesh scattered by the needle

She mutilated my arm
I blinked
and she vanished
leaving behind her wicked smile
I do not have Trypanophobia (Fear of needles) this was just something I wanted to write:p
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EetTheChildrenRAW Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
Fuckin' amazing! You did a lovely job, honestly!
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UrDeadlyDesire Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much:blackrose:
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EetTheChildrenRAW Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
My pleasure!
Keep up the wonderful work,
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UrDeadlyDesire Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Writer
Of course hehe, thanks for the watch as well:hug:
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EetTheChildrenRAW Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
For sure!
You're welcome to check out some of my work as well :3
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this and I do have phobias to needles and pointy objects D:
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UrDeadlyDesire Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you:) Does it seem real, like the person actually has that phobia? 'Cause since you have it, you know the point of view lol.
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well it depends. Some have severe phobia to needles while others have minor. People with severe phobias wont go do it at all, or when they do, there anxiety acts up. Others with Minor phobias, well do it just b.c they know they need to do it, not that they want to do it and they will be scared, but need to get it down. I have minor phobia to needles, I will take it, but it gets to me. This is definitely a incident of someone with this type of phobia, but a severe case of phobic to needles.
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UrDeadlyDesire Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Writer
Ohhh I didn't thought of that, of course if you have that phobia to an extreme level you wouldn't even go there. Thank you very much for your input:)
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pulchrissima Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
Well, somebody who is hobic could be forced to go. For example, I am forced to go by my mother. Because the age of the subject is somewhat ambiguious, it could be something like that.
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