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I fell for her in winter, my winter girl
she had rosy red cheeks and beautiful curls
Her skin was so pale, doves were ashamed
and she knew my heart well so she didn't play games

Oh but her heart was a frozen lake
water turned black by the deep cold
sending shivers of solitude in each wake

She didn't bestow anyone a smile,
one that would make her white teeth appear
a shocking contrast to her mellow style,
because she was so naive

Her rueful complexion only dawned my interest;
how can someone so detached to the world
also be the bravest?

This was my winter girl
emotions meek like the leaves that fell from the trees
long before winter started

Beauty so perplexing, her whole being was a painting
A stroke of scarlet would create her lips
Ashy undertones would establish her eyes
The trunk of a pine tree be her hair

She smelled of apples and cinnamon
the purest winter harmonies,
my beautiful winter girl...
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:music:"I fell for her in summer, my lovely summer girl,
From summer she is made, my lovely summer girl,
I’d love to spend a winter with my lovely summer girl,
But I’m never warm enough for my lovely summer girl,
It’s summer when she smiles, I’m laughing like a child,
It’s the summer of our lives; we’ll contain it for a while
She holds the heat, the breeze of summer in the circle of her hand
I’d be happy with this summer if it’s all we ever had.”:music:

― Maggie Stiefvater, Shiver

:bulletblack: I got insprired by Sam's song for Grace♥ Decided to add my little twist to it as per se.
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~Randy-Cushman Aug 10, 2012  Professional General Artist
well written
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~UrDeadlyDesire Aug 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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Wow.....i know its been an awful long time since i have said anything on any of your work, but i tell you what, you have improved Sooo much since i last saw any! Its as if you're a whole new writer, and as if you have really matured in the way and what you write about! :) Perhaps that inspiration was what you needed to take you to the next level of your writing mate! and your English must have gotten a lot better aswell!
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~UrDeadlyDesire Aug 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks dudelio :D I like finding new words here and there to use:p I can be mature sometimes haha
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